All Comments on 'A Change of Heart'

Looking forward to Ch 2.

Stop now please

It was okay for a first story but you must learn to re-read and edit. For example, there were far too many 'honeys' in the piece and often inappropriate to the dialogue.

I read almost this identical story on another site--one that is strictly BDSM. The only difference is that one was written better, but the idea was exactly the same. 1*

Love chastity and long term denial but there needs to be a carrot so to speak. A chance albeit rare, for release. Good writing though, I'd like to see more. 4 stars

please continue! can't wait for this story to experience the new adventures!

This is not sex, its sociopathy. How many times does he have to say "no" in order for her to understand ? Do you also support marital rape ?

if my wife ever came up with some idiocy like that, she would be spitting broken teeth and have a NIKE up her ass.

I seldom comment on stories, but this one was complete crap, and that from someone who is actually into femdom and male chastity. If the man in the story fell for her BS, he's a complete tool!

Your bio says you are heavily into male chastity. Nothing wrong with that, but you've created a pathological situation here. It is unhealthy on every level. I would qualify it within torture porn. Noncon/reluctance is better fit, given it is against the desires and wishes of the husband. The wife as you've written her reeks of militant man hating lesbian. She is not a heterosexual domme.

Nihilism is not erotic.

After a little research I found that this story is listed under the same title and author name on the other site. However, when posting a story that has been on another site it's a good idea to state that to avoid concerns like the one I had. Again, my sincerest apology.

And unbelievable!

This is from someone on a college campus like Berkeley

LOVE IT!!!!!

Please post next chapter

Absolutely awesome. Please add to it

simply unbelievable garbage

The wife is crazy to demand that kind of complete and permanent chastity from the husband (while insulting him and men generally in truly vile ways), and the husband is even crazier for submitting to it.

Heterosexual S+M meets radical feminism...NOT a very good combination. Leave this for college "gender studies" lunacy.

And it is full of bullshit. You can't truly believe not letting husband cum is going to just satisfy him. He will divorce you once your true self comes out. That of a cheating slut wife.

1star.

Complete nonsense. This is not kinky, it's disgusting.

Dear reasonably intelligent (?) commentators:

Have you forgotten:

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You may not enjoy the thought of total emasculation, that's fine. You may not like a woman's ability to do the same. That's fine too.

But to criticize because it's not believable is like complaining water is wet! Fiction people fiction. :)

get rid of the bitch there are better women out there than her they want your cum

To the anon comment about it's just fiction, well yes but don't authors want readers to engage with their characters? In which case reading a storyline like this invokes passion, hence the comments. If it's "just fiction" then I guess If a fictional story about young child sexual abuse was posted, that would be ok as well????

Well written and thoroughly enjoyable story. Only disappointment is that the gifted author hasn't written more! :)

Thanks for sharing and good luck. 5 stars and favorited.