All Comments on 'A Change of Perspective'

I can't wait to find out about Si's date! Great job! Good writing, and I love that it is about cycling! Thanks!

I can't wait for more of this story! What I'm reading so far is very interesting, keep up the good job! ;-)

GREAT STORY ..ENJOYING IT SO FAR. LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. iS Gil gay or bi? He wants Si, but he left to give attention to the girls. He's being a good friend though so I kinda feel badly that Si doesn't like him. And afterall, he isn't leaving the place that Gil lives in one day. So, I guess this story will be more about coming out than a romance? or can I hope it will turn into a romance between him and James?

Gil's bi - and he has his own story, As Good As Guitars, which is part-way posted at the moment. Simon's a main character in Guitars, but in the original draft James was only mentioned in passing in one paragraph. He took on a life of his own while I wasn't looking, and Perspective was the result. There are four more chapters to come - I hope you enjoy them too :-)

are extremely valuable when you are hiding so deeply in the closet that you cannot even admit the truth to yourself. Poor Simon, I hope he finds some peace of mind - and I wish he could have ended up with Gil. I'll have to read his story afterwards.

didn't like the ending