All Comments on 'A Cheerleader's Release'

by KarmasToy

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Femdomina1Femdomina1over 5 years ago
Cool

Very interesting story indeed.

Soma99Soma99over 6 years ago
Good story!

I really enjoyed the first 90%, but the ending was a little confusing.

I would have liked him to just be watching from the window.

5 Stars though!

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 6 years ago
Nice beginning!

You're off to a strong start!

Good details...and interior monologues!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Just one small point.

To crouch is to squat. A crotch is that area between your legs.

Great story apart from that detail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
MORE PLEASE!

asap WE NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THIS STORY!

simonsteelsimonsteelover 6 years ago
Excellent read!

Excellent story, very well written, and helped me squirt my load all over the place. Hope to read more from you!

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