by KarmasToy
I really enjoyed the first 90%, but the ending was a little confusing.
I would have liked him to just be watching from the window.
5 Stars though!
You're off to a strong start!
Good details...and interior monologues!
To crouch is to squat. A crotch is that area between your legs.
Great story apart from that detail.
Excellent story, very well written, and helped me squirt my load all over the place. Hope to read more from you!