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ender2k2kender2k2kover 3 years ago
What a great follow up story.

I hope you add another chapter one day. Merry Christmas and thank you.

Crusader235Crusader235over 3 years ago
Excellent

Such an excellent adventure to another world. I truly thought that MELON was a play on words for ELON Musk, silly me. I now have to read your earlier mermaid stories to catch up. I to would like to see future chapters continuing this story. Five Christmas Starts for you! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

PrincessJezebelPrincessJezebelover 3 years ago
Great fun!

It took me a few pages to get the sense of this world, but I was fascinated as the story developed. And I got a good laugh when Sirena was singing "Fairytale of New York" with the children. An excellent choice! I look forward to reading more of your work!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

My first story by this author. I loved it and the world behind it!

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Long-time writer of computer software, technical documents, papers and more boring stuff. Long-time pretend writer of fiction, erotic and other, but never put these latter 'out there.' It's time. Many of my stories take place in what I call "Mel's Universe," after the female l...