All Comments on 'A Christmas Story'

by another half assed wannabe writers.

I'm not quite understanding how you feel I left the story unfinished. Typically a story is made up of three parts: Characters - Setting - Plot. Perhaps you missed that lesson in Critiquing 101. The story has all three aspects.

For the record, I'm not claiming to be a writer. I shared a story on the Internet for those interested in light and what I deemed exciting reading. I wasn't looking to sign a book deal with Random House.

I thought this was festive and hot.

Thanks Cowboy. Festive and hot is what I was hoping would be portrayed. It excited me to write it! :)

Enjoyed this story. Gotta love Steamy affairs.