All Comments on 'A Christmas Story Pt. 03'

Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Love it! 5 stars!! Can't wait until the next chapter!!! Keep writing but please spend a little more time on grammar/editing. Overall very good theme/plot. Also try not to wait so long for the next chapters or if there will be a delay, make the chapters longer.

Very interesting story. Looking forward to your next installment.

One suggestion, please proof read and/or find an editor.

I hate critics! I liked your story and can't wait for the next chapter. I think we have critics, is that we need to feel sorry for some one and that's them, if they can do better , let them try.