by j3zza
i really hate when writers post less than half a story. this needs more background, more buildup to sex and a good end. what happens now do they transfer to the same college? do they ever do it again? do the parents find out? does she get pregnant? half a story is worse than no story at all either finish it or delete it but don't leave it like this.
If a gorgeous young woman was coming on to me, it wouldn't matter how much I knew about her, or if I'd EVER seen her before, I'd jump right in bed with her! Great story j3zza, and nicely told. Keep writing.
I liked how you set up the initial sexual tension between these two, and how they followed through with their desire. The experimentation thing was nice. MMMM.
Good Story line. Could stand another chapter. I would love to see more of this. Good Quality writing and a good story line. It's a winner in my book.