All Comments on 'A Christmas Surprise Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
good to go

let the mom join them to .

dliterdliterabout 14 years ago
Too disjointed

The storyline makes little sense, unless it is just for jerking off. Lots of potential but totally wasted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Slow Down

Although consencual adult incest is becoming somewhat acceptable nowdays, still one has a right to expect some guilt in both the parties if the story is to be human, and enjoyable. You went about it too fast. Do slow down a bit and use your imagination, to think what you would have felt if it had been your real father. If you do it right, it will give you a cue as to where to incert the guilt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good job

i thought it was a great story and i really liked the ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
love it but want more!

loved it but want more want to hear how she and her dad love each other more each time they fuck and while the baby grows inside... eventually their daughter is born and as she gets older she comes into the love making since her mom (and sister) wants her to know the pleasures of her daddy the way she did... threesome... happy family ... just and idea!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Hot. I love father/daughter stories especially when they get pregnant. Would love to see more.

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