by hushhh
OK. So, the kid runs out of his friends house, stammering about being sick. He wasn't sick, he was overcome with his horniness that, he probably went home and really got off a good one. Need to continue with this story.
More please, this is a good start, but would like to know more! Does he get anywhere, does the brother/son get involved, and how about the sister? Loads more fun to come I hope!
It's a good start hope you add to it.I like the ending, leaves it open for alot of options.Just a idea, you should have Chris's mom slowly become Dan's "bitch"/sex slave.Thats just a thought it is YOUR story you can take it anywhere you want to. Hope you keep writing.Like they say about Teachers, practice makes perfect.
Fairly decent start, but it's half a story. complete storys have an actual ending. This one was left hanging.
So tell us some more of this stunning older woman....Rich
Well written but tooo short..
haven't seen any added chapters????????
Just checked it's your first writtings...Well I suggest you making them longer......