All Comments on 'A Cloak of Lies Ch. 11'

This tale gets more interesting with each chapter. You're never sure who's on who's side. A smart bit of writing. Bravo, Molly!

good job Molly...

Glad you are working on this one, I really look forward to it! I like this one, with the twists you took. Who expected the "Butler" to turn good? Nice touch kid.

Looking forward to more!

Okay. I re-read the WHOLE thing and now... if you leave me waiting another year for the next chapter, I'll lose it. Do you hear me? Nuts. Then people will be mad a ME for not writing anymore and it will be just a vicious cycle. So... when's the next chapter coming?

Love this story. So exciting, so passionate. James Bond but better (no campy lines, that's for sure). Thanks for re-posting it.

-E

This keeps getting better! Thanks for the next chapter.

Can't wait to read more.

The author knows the Springfield, Illinois area. There is an airstrip near Pleasant Plains. Monroe Street is next to the Illinois State Capitol