All Comments on 'A Close Family Ch. 02'

Nope, Nada, you can't be serious you just started

There's way to much good material in here to stop now!

if you ask me, i think it's better to end it here.

i don't want those 'sick' people to add characters for the sake of their lusts...

it's just gross to add the mother and/or the brother...

because it's just doesn't make any sense.

the story should end it here... with dignity.

You can't stop now! Please! This series is amazing!

You switched from first to third person alot in the story.

I loved both stories, but you should end it here. Might get complicated.

After reading the lengthy first part, I expected more from "Ch. 02". As Lee entered the story and opened to the prospect of learning about sexual intercourse from her own brother, then to have the story end with nothing more than a 'wham-bam thank-you-mama' is a little bit of a let down. - - Stories that draw the reader in an make them feel something for the characters have "promised" something to the reader, a relationship. If the reader does not get let down slowly or get a happily ever after ending, then you should just leave the story open. Don't finish it, leave the possibility of a sequel out there for the readers to wonder about, and leave the potential that you can return to the storyline if you want at some time in the future.

I expected more, it was great but way to short. you should continue the story

great story i would love to hear more about them

Both stories were great, there needs to be a longer, 3rd chapter. The show must go on!

These two stories were great! Please please please make a 3rd chapter about as long as the first one

I really enjoyed this story. Would love to read more of this series!

That story left me amazed and sucked into the content of this story. Damn good writer thats all i gotta say.

Chapter 3 Marrying?

i just have to say that i loved this story. i wish you would write more on it.

Idk why you wont right more. This seiries happens to be one of the best on this site that ive seen so far.op

Keep them coming they are great!!!!!!!!!!!!

Absolutely a great story i would love to hear more about them. Very well written...Thank You

A pity there won't be more...

Hope that u make another chapter to this story. Really enjoy this one.

Plz write more..it was well writen & a good build up..from confusion to a like a mild mood to certain..something wild to finally something sweet :3

the rythm and actions are a lot faster than the first chapter. it's good written. go on with this good writing

This has to be the best I have evr read. If on a scale of 1 to10, I would give a 15!!!! Keep up the good work.

Give me more

Mom/son incest is my favorite but brother/sister is my second choice. A really nice, loving story without all the guilt angst that usually mucks up the story somewhat.

This is the best I've ever read. I'd love to read more; expecially about their trip to Spain.

Cinco Estrellas! I give it 5 stars again.

If I could give this series 6 stars I would. One of the best on the whole site. Keep it up and please, please, PLEASE, write more for this series. This is too good to stop.

I loved the story and I liked how it proceeded. While I would love to read more of this at the same time I feel that the end is one that should not be tampered with.

Come on dude, there has to be more. You can't leave us with just a taste. It was really good Please write more.

The three sisters plus Mike made a lifetime commitment to physically loving each other over and above marriages or anything else! This was a very moving story of 4 people who ALWAYS took care of each others love first! I think Mikro hit the jackpot with this LOVE STORY!

I agree with the always insightful commenter who said that motherfucking is his favorite kind of family fucking. That said, sisterfucking can be great, too. In a way, it's the easiest and most natural kind of family fucking. Brother and sister grow up together, when they're older they inevitably catch exciting glimpses of what each has between their legs. His own sister's sweet slit is the first cunt the boy sees, just as the first cock a girl sees is her own brother's meaty prick. As their hormones kick in, the boy's eager to find out how his cock feels up his sister's pretty little twat, she's real anxious to discover how her twat feels stuffed by her brother's big hard cock. In this excellent story, Mike's got three cute sisters, and as the cock-toter and balls-bearer of the group he gets to fuck them all. The last is his favorite sis, Lee, and he busts her cherry. That should always be the official job of a big brother, universally understood and acknowledged, and big strong smart Mike does a perfect job up his little sis's cute little cunt. Mike and his sisters are lucky, the boy's got plenty of creamy semen in his hot young balls to fill all three of his sisters' twats to overflowing, over and over again. Their parents are happy that their children seem to get along so well.

great story please keep it going

mate this is one of the best stories i have read and i hope that u continue

All you have here is the ass-kissing from a bunch of horny retards whao spell almost as badly as you do. This stroty (and I use the term advisedly) is almost complete gibberish, dashed-off in twenty minutes while the author could still remember what he was writing about. This sucks, it has no redeeming factors, it's rushed, plotless and dull, only the moron brigade with their hands in their pants are falling over themselves to kiss your ass, why don't you have the guts to leave the comments from people who are actually trying to tell you something?ED24

These authors are doing this for fun they haven't claimed as far as I've seen to have a masters in education.This is fun DH. and I believe we all know what the DH stands for.

lets be honest this was the best out of both of the stories. had all the things i enjoyed

Please make another chapter!

More please

Yes, more.

Not enough stories just let it be a happy ending. I loved this story and wouldn't mind if it was longer, but that was a nice way to end it, too.

DAMN BUNCH OF WINO'S LIVING IN THAT HOME! GREAT STORY!!!

It would be awesome to get the mom involved as well

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Alrighty, let me start off first by saying that I'm not dogging the author's story. I LOVED the story!! So I'm not just trying to be mean or hateful, the story was great! It's just getting through it unscathed that was the problem, hehehe. Rushed and un-proofed I'm guessing! :). ...oh, and I nitpick for fun a bit.. So, grain of salt and all that!!

I don't recall it in the first story, though I might have forgotten, but yeesh! You kept changing from third person, to first person, then back again! Just say NO!! Hehe.

Then the odd typos that weren't corrected... Though a few were like 'How did he accidentally hit that key way over there?!

...and the lack of punctuation is KILLING me!! One paragraph, where he's taking her virginity, was missing like four commas and a period. ...sex scene folks, I want to enjoy it!! ;). ...oh, he must have done it with his boxers on, because he never took them off, lol.

" He didn't want to do too much this first time so after a kiss on her pussy lips and brush with her clitoris he made his way back up to her lips. "

Ok, I had to stop here a moment just to say... WHAT. THE. FUCK. I mean fucking REALLY?! How many multitudes of women's first times would have been a THOUSAND percent better if the douche dude had actually BOTHERED to go down on her, and not just to lick her enough to get her wet, but lick her to a screaming, clawing, ass arching, toe curling orgasm before he stuck his dick in her?? Fuck me, is there NO hope for my fellow man?! Fuck, I should just take out a standing ad on Craigslist offering A Good/Great First Time, listing the complimentary services that it comes with! ;)

(Yes, he got around to it the next day, and humorously, there was ass arching, hehehe! ...and yes, of course she had a wonderful first time, it is fun fantasy fiction after all! ;)

...but hey, she could have been super nervous (normal first time) so an overly tight, somewhat dry kitty. Add to that her small pussy, his overly large cock and you get a really painful first time, start to finish, with no orgasm. (Not like there's some huge number of girls having an orgasm their first time. Hell, lots that Never have an orgasm during intercourse without fingers or a vibrator on her clit!:( )

" This had to be Lee, her lack of finesse in the art of cock sucking was obvious. Then another mouth and then Lee again. Without opening his eyes he guessed that both Lyn and Lesley were showing Lee how to suck cock and she was a quick and eager learner. "

I've never really ever got much out of blowjobs, they're nice, of course, but not cum-worthy. ...Though I'd almost KILL to have Lee, never had a girl shove my dick down her throat, much less want to try on her own! Whew!! She should pop over and convince my wife that it's awesome fun to fuck your guy up!! Hehe! Mike's only fuckup was not keeping his eyes open so he could see her with those huge, round, puppy-dog eyes, tears streaming down her cheeks, drool leaking from the corners of her mouth and running down her chin! Dude would have cum so hard he would black out!!

Damn, now I'm horny and my wife's at work. ...guess I'll call my sister. ;)

Ch. 2 was 10 times better than Ch. 1. Could have cut Mike's "confusion" out completely, and most of the teasing.

Great story. 2nd part was a bit short but can understand, it might have gotten a bit repetitive and confusing. Def 5 stars