All Comments on 'A Closer View'

I don't know how I missed reading this story, which is among your best, although most all of them are outstanding.

turns into dog day after-nooners and more. TK U MLJ LV NV

12 years old, and I’d just ran home from the playground a mile away in S. F.; I flopped on the bed to catch my breath and looked in the lower flat’s window to see that twin girls had moved in downstairs! 😜you’ve stirred those fond memories from 50 years ago- 😊

It is so great to learn the states of mind of our respective lovers from their earlier encounter as they get it on in the present! I don't know that I would have handled the dialogue quite the same way, but it was, "oh so satisfying" to see my questions answered in this tale.

There are times that I really want to throttle Jim. That he would be so crude about responding to Maria's proposal was the first. The second came as I learned that, even at the end, he was still playing "hard to get" on having this goddess become a roommate.

That said, I really loved the twist of having Mrs. Dumbrowsky getting off to our two lovers.

HOT, and loved she had her natural rich Hispanic fur burger still, and that he really appreciated it...

5, and fave

Jim's got an offer he can't refuse--probably more sex in a month than he's had his entire life.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

A great story, well told with believable characters and a story. I loved it. You are a wonderful writer.

Love your writing thank you for sharing your abundant talent!

I really enjoyed the build up and gentle seduction as things progressed. I especially love how his lady tweaked and fondled and sucked his man nipples as well.

My wife and a former long term lady partner did and still do this to me, it is such an amazing way to hurry along an orgasm. Thank you for mentioning it as most of my male buddies don't get any feelings at all from their nipples.

Great story and I loved the ending. Another one that could do with a sequel especially after Maria (and her flatmates??) move in!!!

Another great story, you write about sex so well

Nice sequel. It does beg for a third chapter.

Nice story! Hopefully there is more to this one. You are a very talented and creative. Looking forward to reading more of you stories.

Thank you on so many levels. This just built on the first story and went so much higher. Love how you brought them back together and then added to it. Fantastic sex scene, loved her full bush, wish more writers would do that.

That closing scene as the neighbour masturbates to them knocked it out of the park!

Liked this one would be fun to see where it went after she moved in.

Thanks for another great story Ann loved the characters and especially loved the ending

Just as stimulating as the first time I read it..thank you for your fine considerations.