All Comments on 'A Cold Day in Hell'

I loved the framing part the most! Definitely feels like Michigan.

I liked the story. Thanks for your time and imagination.

of them together, but not much passion.

Loved the way you set the scene including Hell and a Michigan winter and while there may not be enough passion for some this is a romance and a very nice one at that. Well done *****

One can only hope to have such a Halloween

There's a good reason to cling together for warmth...

when Hell freezes over. In this case, there was more than just warmth between Grover and Samantha. Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Good luck in the contest.

Wellll...Now you've DONE it !

I'm a Fan!

Who knew you're a Planner!!!

Sets of WetSpot towels?

Do you believe in Love At First Read?

AND you're sweet, intelligent, articulate...probably good looking...

and you live near Zingerman's?

The back of my neck is warming!

They have Beef & Guiness stew soup tonight!

A little Slurp Time this evening, Rach?

Thanks for such warm, loving stories!

Nice story but boring.... not passionate enough nor does express deep feelings. Better suited to novels and novellas or non-erotic category

Far from boring. Not just a quick romp, but very sweet. Thanks for sharing.

5*

Tc

Good story! A bit twee, but hey, it is romantic after all. A few spelling and grammar booboo’s along with an over-simple plot makes this a 4⭐️ for me.

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

True romance is hard to find these days, you hit the mark in my book!!!

I just have no idea what those people are quibbling about. So darlin' a story. Thanks!

Boring.....

i see the name Grover and think muppet. but i did enjoy the story, dont need dramas every time sometimes simple is good