All Comments on 'A Cold Dish Ch. 01'

by Nature4all

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bloodandsandbloodandsandover 10 years ago
well i hope there will be a chapter two shortly

I hate cliffhangers. so I hope next chapter will be forth coming and it will be longer. thank you.

JendehJendehover 10 years ago
Good start

I think you have a good start here even if Rebecca is a little over the top. Write more soon. These two have the potential to have some really great angry sex. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I really like how this story starts ! Can't wait to see where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Hi, i loved it. when are you going to add more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MMMn

This is GOOD! I love what is heating up! Please do more quick!!

Nature4allNature4allover 10 years agoAuthor
Wow

Did NOT expect this to be this popular. Well, I have a draft of 2 in the works, but I'm not happy with it, so you're going to have to be patient!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
chapt 2

hows the draft coming along? will we be seeing it soon? cool start

Nature4allNature4allalmost 10 years agoAuthor

Chapter two is starting to be worked out. Between several moves, financial difficulties, and my computer committing seppeku, I've been all over the place. Hopefully this will be continued soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
looking forward to chapter 2

please continue the story. It is a good start. would love to know what happens next

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 9 years ago

Like A Cold Dish, this can be a particularly Hot Story. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
oh my gosh

Can't wait for second ch. It left me craving 4 more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Great story please make a second part!!

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Edge of your seat.😉

Gave you 5 stars in hopes you would give us the rest. 😍😘😉

DarkAurther6969DarkAurther6969about 4 years ago
Exclllenty Unique Story.......

Great Story Not Only to be Perfectly Honest I Thought it would go one way but it Never went that way and I'm Glade that it didn't go that way in the End. But also in the Beginning I could Identify with the POV in the Beginning of the story and what Happened to her in the Past.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A COLD DISH CH. 01 when is CH 02 and ending coming

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A COLD DISH CH. 01 when will CH 02 AND ending coming

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