by nat_rose
i have been waiting for this story to appear that when i saw it i cud barely make it into half the story i was cumming. so hot and hope to see more.
Between them them seem to have an accumulated IQ of 10! Their actions and the words spewing out of their mouths are so absurd as to be laughable! Awful story telling.
Meredith is just being a bitch and liar... Ali did as she was asked... I think Meredith should be thrown out for lying as she can't be trusted and let Ali into the sorority since she earned it... the school needs to be more trans friendly
really like your lastest story! <3 keep going :)
I just hope the next chapter come a bit quicker, I already cant wait!! =D this one was almost over too fast.
Just WOW. ...
Your profile picture is gorgeous (if it is you) and you are writing about fantasies that I think damn near all of us gurls have.
This story is a Luxury Train moving at the perfect pace and has kept me cumming steadily. Please write the chapters you mentioned, no matter how long it may take, just keep this same intensity and quality.
Fantastic story, easily one of the top ten I have read on here, btw, this IS in the top five at least.
Thank you for writing.
-sasha-
I can't wait for the next part! Loving the story! I hope the next chapter is even longer! Please message me if you want impute!
I am a femboi and if college could be like this i would sign up in a minute -- i love your story telling and can feel each emotion of ali as she is humiliated and sinks deeper. i had a fantasy of being used by a frat totally for a weekend -- but i think your depiction of what that might be like is far more accurate than what i dream about..........
Chaper 4 please, But add more with abby and the sorority please no feelings for men.
cockolding him when his girlfriend shows up as well as having abby dominating him and his girlfriend would be really hot.
Great story so far. It's a shame that it hasn't been continued. It's had the desired effect on me, thank-you!
You are such a tease. I really love your writing and this is a great story. You've got me all turned on and wanting to see where this goes! 💋
Please finish the story! You have three more chapters.
Making panties and nylons all wet and sticky. Waiting for chapters 4 ,5 and 6. Please finish Ali's journey.
where are the next 3 parts? You wrote 2 stories after in '17 &'18.... PLEASE continue it!
Nat, I adored your story. I did something similar to two gay guys my first year at University.
I was greatly disappointed that you never finished the rest of your chapters. Since it's been 6 years now, I suspect you never will, still I wish you would. Thank You for sharing your wonderful work with us. It is really greatly appreciated.
amy, a writer elsewhere
I was disappointed. I really liked the first chapter and some of the second. But the mental transformation seems too fast and too sappy. The thing I hated the most however is the nasty name calling and meanness. Ali is lied to spat upon, degraded, and bullied. What an awful turn of events. I am sorry this story turn so dark.
omg my heart aches for what Abby did to Ali, shit got my crying over how mean Meredith was. what a horrible turn of events
Please finish the story just found it and noticed its been awhile im totally hooked