All Comments on 'A Comedy of Errors'

by Erlikkhan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Shakespeare Move Over

Creative and very nasty at the same time. Kept me hard for hours!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
mmmm

i always love your stories, you seem to know how to keep a girl wet for hours...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Terrific story

Absolutely sensational seeing your return. And what a story to comeback with - Got me hard; kept me hard! Loved it.

Thanks again

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very good

I love the story it was very good.

deadonedeadoneabout 14 years ago
Just a simple jerk off story

Good for stroking to.

God forbid anything like this ever happening!

aarrrghaarrrghover 13 years ago
Great

Great read. Loved every word of except for the occasional name mix up.

aarrrgh@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
What a story!

WOW - very arousing!

Just added you to my favourite authors - keep up the hard work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
MADD HOT SKILLS

You have a gift for sexy writing. Wondeful story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A1 story man

Awesome story hats off

I would like u to write more, like more twins twin mom, twin daughter, n twin bf . They will sex with each other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
very nice

i like it and would love to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Left off one tag for this story......

CHEATING.........

Almost everyone in this story was cheating on their significant others. Amy, Linda, Mark, Beth, DAD!!!!!. Definitely a cheaters paradise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot

Would love to see a second chapter to this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Musical Beds

Loved the story. This is a hot family. Write more about their adventures.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 7 years ago
Just how it all fit in. Very clever.

Enjoyed this very much.

texasj65texasj65about 5 years ago
Holy fuckfest batman

I needed a scorecard to keep track of the characters fucking everyone. LOL. Fun read.

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
One hot fuckfest.

All that sex in one glorious day and night. Good job putting all of the nymphomaniacs in one house.

gkrishnagkrishnaover 3 years ago
Meh

The core idea is good, but this medley of characters who have nothing more to them than "likes to fuck" makes it a pretty weak uninteresting story. Either should have been a slimmer story with just Mark, Beth, and Beth's mom (and maybe Lisa, if you had to), or should have been a multi chapter narrative with the characters properly introduced and fleshed out (pardon the pun).

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not exactly what happened to me, but close enough it brought back fond old memories (fondled memories?)

Thanks; I'll have to check out your other works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Kinda got confused with all the constant mistaking someone for someone else

Marklynda2Marklynda2about 2 years ago

Funny how one little mistake can change so many lives. Identical twins sure do have fun if they want to. The future should be very interesting and exciting for this family! Thanks for sharing your vision and talents.

IEnjoyEroticaIEnjoyEroticaover 1 year ago

Couldn't finish. Too many people all at once.

Calulu482Calulu4828 months ago

Just kinda written poorly.

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