All Comments on 'A Command Performance'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
loved it

this made me want to try sexual things

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Not bad.

Nice quick story. Would have been even better if the characters were fleshed out a bit more. It feels like there could be a sequel. Keep up the good work.

iguanacoosbayiguanacoosbayalmost 14 years ago
Great Story

Loved the story, and now I see a second chapter. Keep up the great work....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

If Cindy wasn't in the story, it would be better.

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