you had 5 stars from me till you added the last sentence about the abuse and her having a broken arm . that was over the top bullchit and you should have known better .
Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...