All Comments on 'A Controlling Interest'

Haven't even read your new story yet, but I know it will be great

And fuck you dear annony in your heart!!!

However, still rated this a five

Hot hot hot and very well written. Congrats 5*

Please make this into a series! Well written and loved Steve!

The way this story is written, Brandon is the hidden protagonist. The story is a projection of his fears and his personality that causes the fears. Insecure, emotionally immature .. therefore a latent misogynist.

Phase 2 is a BTB story.

she needed to get caught !!!

Amazing, evocative, erotic and compelling.

3-4 pages tops would have been better, or you just break it into parts or make a series.

Please, could you write another history of 'My kinky wife slips up'? Thank you very much indeed!

Love this story. Will there be a sequel? You left this story wide open for one.

That was h0t! Good mix of genres..Was hoping that hotel room would be used up too though.

Loved it up to the end of page 2. I would have finished with her over the table or on it, returning to the party leaking cumAEE7

Very well written, and very sexy. I'm curious how Reagan would react to Brandon finding everything out though, considering she's such a heartless slut, maybe in part 2 :) . Thank you for the story!

I hope this story has a sequel, I know you tend to take time inbetween stories, but this is one that needs to be followed up. What happens next? Can she resist Steve? Brandon doesn't appear to be the type to be a willing cuckold, so does he win out in the end? You point to that direction here, but so much remains unwritten and therefore unknown. I hope you do write a sequel.

You write well but you're not writing the 'Great American Novel', you're writing porn.

Way too wordy!!

Excellently done. Good, erotic story with interesting characters. I liked the length of the story as it needed it to really get the story told.

This touched me. It's a fantasy of mine and you nailed it beautifully. If my husband and I fight and are having make up sex before I've completely calmed down, I imagine fucking one of his friends or business rivals and it works every time. I get completely wet and I cum far more quickly. I've nearly given the game away once by crying out the wrong name but somehow I got away with it. On one occasion the Patrick situation kind of happened to me at a dinner. I was alone with a guy who was gorgeous but who had stitched up my husband in a deal a year before. He knew he was hot and he knew he was making me wet. I didn't go as far as Reggie but just to see what it was like I let him kiss my neck during a slow dance towards the end of the evening. Reggie's got more courage than I do. Congratulations on a superb story!

Odeon, this is a masterpiece. A lot of work went into this where it counts. Amazing work, please write more.

Well done and it kept a high level of erotic interest. Only downer for me is when a writer talks about the cock entering the womb or the cervix. Have examined many women, that just doesn't happen. Hope there is a sequel where Brandon gets something positive. He doesn't deserve the slut or working to help those guys.

Once again. Don't you guys ever get over the big cock syndrome? It is not all what you make it out to be. It hurts too much to be pleasureable. So Steve's controlling interest isn't really. So put away your toy trains and your dreams of Trigger and get real!

Load of shit.

Lucky to have one star.

cuckold faggot shit .

he reads all of these LW and cuck stories remembering his dead wife and how she made him a cuck his entire marriage. He's just a retarded brain dead fag!!

...mince words. This is hot! High five!

if Brandon couldn't smell the sex on her unwashed body he is scentless. Really he couldn't tell she was freshly fucked. Just another stupid unrealistic story. #1 TK

How the hell can she suck off one guy and fuck one guy and he not smell it as she never washed up after wrapping herself around him wtf.

Great story!!!! Keep it up!!!!!

This is an outstanding story of erotica. The descriptive writing is masterful.

I was screaming with her! Amazing!

I do agree that it could have been tightened up a bit. And for little errors - besides Saks, the actor is named William Holden.

and i loved the on the phone oral!

My god, that was tedious and sooo boring!! Find a good editor - this story should be half the size it is - and it would have an even greater impact. Other than that, just another stupid, cheap, disgusting, lying, cheating whore for big cock story. How anyone could possibly be enthralled with or respect such a cheap, conniving, vicious little back-stabbing ditch gash?!

What does it take for a cheap, seasoned whore to betray her "soul mate"? Just one of these: a bigger cock; a bigger wallet; a more violent thug

In the real world, a proper ending would be when immediately after a bj or a fuck from such an easy, gash spreading whore, either man would have pulled out and urinated all over the vapid cunt.

Title says it all. Could have been tightened up/edited a bit more, but overall, it was a great read.

What kind of sickos love the crap? Just a total slut ...

Interesting cheating story. Certainly to long for what it says, but still entertaining if you read it fast

Lost me at William Holding! No, a good story, but you need at least a beta-reader if not an editor. William Holding... that's as bad as Natalie Would or Dean Martian!

It's too much time consuming to read such a story.

It's a bit exaggerated, too.

So. Many. Words. Too. Many. Words. Just as in bigger is not always better, neither is a longer story better than a short one. I liked the comment about the author thinking he was writing the next great American novel. The author does have skill. He just lacks overall perspective. Aside from the fact that Brandon would surely recognize Reagan’s cries of passion and/or smell the sex on her, the story is unbelievable. Would he really not call her or look for her? Would he just assume she is in some random hotel room after acting totally weird on the phone with him? Also, the entire business transactions should have been either skipped or fleshed out as it’s apparent the author has no clue what he’s talking about. The writer’s technical skills are not the issue. The morality or lack there of is also not an issue. This is a sex story site. The issue is this is a story completely devoid of reality and it is waaaaay too long.

Holy moly !! I caught myself holding my breath through most of the one on one scenes. A bit long and maybe a couple of orgasms too many, but regardless a very erotic encounter !! One of the best. An easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊

Editor STAT!

The secret sauce of this type of writing is inducing frisson. This writer does it in spades. Having realistic, non-stereotypical characters helps, too. It's no secret that many women loathe their secret lovers. Yeah, no real Martian Slut Rays in this universe--just crappy writers. This writer isn't one of those.

Gave it 1 star, because there is not a 0 star. Got bored after page 3 and browsed until the end. To totally unrealistic, for me. Totally to fictitious for me.