All Comments on 'A Cougar Totally Turned Ch. 02'

I am absolutely loving this! I honestly could read this all day. ~ L

Wonderful writing so far. I can’t wait to see what comes next. Thank you for sharing.

...breathless.

Another fabulous chapter, and I so loved the direction the story took with the submissive controlling certain aspects that shocked the dominant. I'm off to read chapter three with excitement.

The chapter was romantic, erotic, sexy and just plain animalistic all at the same time. The description of movement and emotion was excellent. It allowed the reader to easily picture whatever the characters were doing or feeling.

As Julia and Sheri get closer emotionally there initial roles (sub/dom) are blurring and melding together. This makes perfect sense since Julia has been the aggressor in all of her previous relationships and expected to be in this one.

You have managed to nicely combine romance and raw teasing sex, ending in a fantastic release for both the characters and the readers both. Well done.

We are taken along into the statosphere with these two (unlikely) lovebirds. It's an unexpected romance, but done so convincingly that -- well, of course!

I'm impressed with the way each of the characters, in her own way, is swept away by the other and how devilishly they compete to drive each other to greater heights of arousal and satisfaction.. It's the impulsive stepping out into public, with the exuberance of just plain needing for it to show, that really made the depth of emotion convincing for me.

I completely buy that these two are in the initial phase of what one hopes will be a life-long joy ride, but seeing how many chapters follow, I have a bit of fear that what goes up must come down (which simply builds suspense).

The flow is wonderful & well thought out!

" HOTTER !!! "

I'm really looking forward to the rest of this series!

What a pair!

I really loved the way Julia came out with a kiss, that was so romantic.

But I don't believe her outing Sheri like that, would have ended any other way but disastrously.

Being outed before your ready is bad enough, but being outed in public is horrible! I KNOW!!!!!!!!! I was 16 years old at the time and I lost all of my friends and family. Including my mother and father. In Texas, you have the right to be "Straight!"

Back to the story. It's a lovely story and I love both of your characters, Julia and Sheri. The fact that neither of them are dominant or submissive enough for me is irrelevant. This is a beautiful and touching story, of the love between two women..

Thank You, so much for sharing your story with us...

submissivepussylicker, lynda.

Hottest shower scene ever!!!

And it just keeps getting better.

Love it!!!

Need I say more... *wink*

IDB.

5 Stars doesn't do it justice!

great writing, cant wait for more.. wonderful and erotic

My undivided attention! 5 stars!

Absolutely another great story. So glad I found your page. Some of the best I've read.

SB

An excellent second chapter which takes the story forward nicely.

Interesting to see who will lead next in this sensual dance. Also like the contrast between both women's public and private personas when they're together.

The writing is absolutely first class. The shower scene was soooo hot and the interplay between them seems so intimate and loving, even though one is supposed to be submissive it's not all the time and that makes the story so much better.