by TheBusinessMan
While a few of the stories jumped around a bit, it still kept me reading all the way through this saga. Can't wait for the next one.
Wow just wow ! I hope you read this because it’s been almost 3 years since your last story was posted. I’ve written
Over 50 completed stories and one about half as long as Jake’s stories I was a member but didn’t get a chance to post any ,then changed phones twice and forgot passwords . But I hope when I move,I can fix that . I loved this story but you can’t just leave it like this! Catherine,Kim,Caroline all have to be punished and brought to justice! And why is Marie doing all this? Was it for his first wife’s parents was Marie one of her closet friends?? And now that he knows ,can he get into Catherine and Kim’s accounts and get the 25 m in and use it to take care of 7 kids he fathered who will he end up with????Sorry I don’t type well. Damn this has to have an ending,and not a short one ether. This is now my top story ,just beating out Mountaincat4’s Vivian’s decision a fantastic story. Your story was well planned out, well written,great business backgrounds, not bad on the editing but some of the stories seemed misplaced. Maybe on purpose by you. Not sure on that one but overall a great great story! Hope you will respond back and get writing lol Jerseybigtoe