by courage33
I liked chapter 1 but didn't care for this chapter at all.
Great story, are we going to take in the whole family? Don't forget to edit the dumb stuff like here for her (they are like speed bumps). Also some words were missing. Step back from your story for a week then read it (don't scan it) like you've never seen it before.
Really loved it - lived up to the first - looking forward to the 3some they're about to have :)
Keep up the good work and keep them (and me) coming
Mmkay, good story and all but... You use cock way too much, we get it, it's a cock and it's hard, you don't have to repeat it so much, it kills the story, but still looking forward to the next chapter