by DesperateSteve
overall, I liked the story..it was a nice, quick read...may have been better had he been allowed to return her panties the next day? maybe a follow up with a mutual masturbation session ? Just sayin.......
Good premise.
But masturbation is to separated from each other.
Would have preferred that she gave him the thong and told him to masturbate while she watched. Presumably she'd have been playing with her pussy while he was jerking. Dialog about what each was thinking, imagining, fantasizing about during the masturbation would have helped. Perhaps her instructing him to slow down so he wouldn't cum too soon.
Three stars.