All Comments on 'A Crack in Time Ch. 01-02'

is such a mystery. So many women crave the pleasures of humiliation and agony, reveling in their submissiveness. So many men crave the opportunity to give those women what they want, their rigid erections quivering in need.

I think I may have given you too many of my dark secrets, John.

Thank you,

Susan

Oh the time travel part has been ripped off from Timeline.

Fuck this slut and fuck her hard! She wants it bad, and in every orifice and in every way possible. Let all the soldiers have a run at the cute butt of hers. Let them savage her until she's split wide open. It still won't be enough for her. Ignore the cries for mercy, because I know her and it's all part of her game.

Your aroused and anxious readers wait in restless anticipation for further abuse of this slut, but stop holding back. Really let her have it :)

I really enjoyed this story. It's very different. I hope there is going to be more chapters. Can't wait for what's next.

I loved it overall, the only thing I would add to it is that you might want to proofread it a bit more. There more than a few typos and some rather bad grammer. But otherwise, yes I would love to see more chapters as well. Just proofread a bit better ok?

omg give me more damn it!

I love it, please give us more.

wow i loved this one

You really are a sick bastard.. and know nothing about pleasure.

Oh please more more. Just loved it.

ANXIOUSLY AWAITING TO HEAR MORE ABOUT SUSAN'S ADVENTURE.