All Comments on 'A Cruel and Unusual Punishment'

by leeanna19

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hindsight2020hindsight202029 days ago

Is this chapter 1?

rachelanne542007rachelanne54200729 days ago

Looks like the beginning of something intersting

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien42029 days ago

I hope you keep this going. So far I'm in and want more.

FYI fabulous profile picture beautiful.

leeanna19leeanna1929 days agoAuthor

Thanks, I loaded chapter 2 last night. It takes the mods here a few days to publish sometimes. Sex of sorts will start soon.

HOG57headHOG57head29 days ago

I love the concept and you see the story just right. Thanks

pstg65pstg6529 days ago

Punishment, or dream come true?

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago
I like this!

Great start. I hope there’s more to follow.

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Love it. More please!!!

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Great story so far. I do wish you would use the word panties instead of the word knickers. Just a personal preference, no big deal I just think it sounds sexier. I hope they gave him some thongs as well.

leeanna19leeanna1928 days agoAuthor

I use knickers because I'm English. No one here says panties. Pants are men's underwear here. Knickers are exclusively women's.

SuckergurlSuckergurl28 days ago

Heavenly, you've got me all teased up, can't wait for the next chapter,5*

lucy_sometimeslucy_sometimes28 days ago

I have a feeling that this land isn't that far away after all. 5 stars.

lucy_sometimeslucy_sometimes28 days ago

As a Brit, I must agree with the author that knickers is the more usual expression for us. Panties is not nearly as humiliating. It is almost the same as pants. We have many other synonyms: underthings, unmentionables, underwear, smalls, crackers ...

... but knickers is undeniably girly.

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I write short stories. Mainly TV/CD and trans. Most of my stories and chapters are 1200-1800 words. I try to get to the action quickly. I know a lot of people just want to read a quick sexy story. I notice my trans stories get good ratings, but lower reads. I enjoy writing a...