All Comments on 'A Crush, A Milf, and a Small Cock'

It is true, there are women out there who like small cocks. They realize the benefit of foreplay and willing to learn are more important.

Don't search anyway. I am a sixty six y.o smaller cock, 4 inches and half like the man in the story. I love sex (2 or 3 times a week), i am married and my wife enjoys all what we do.

Thanks for your guys comments.

Most real people have names. Your characters would seem more real and relatable if they did too.

I didn't want to name them in this story. I'm implying that "He" is anyone and the "She" is anyone. I did this on purpose.

The premise of an older woman wanting to seduce a younger man because she sympathizes with him over his small cock is good. The way she takes control when they do get together is pretty hot. But, while I appreciate what you're trying to do by not using names, it doesn't work. For a start it makes the whole story seem stilted and unnatural. It also doesn't achieve your aim of making the characters universal. Take this sentence, for example: "She was the best friend of the nephew's older sister (this sister was the second oldest of his three older sisters) and his cousin (his uncle's only daughter and his cousin)." You have to go to such lengths to describe who people are without using names and then go into specifics which mean the characters cannot be just 'anybody'.

I think your writing has potential, otherwise I wouldn't bother posting this.

Thanks. I appreciate the constructive critizism.

Beautifully told on how the perfect storm of coupling can be so wonderful. Very well written in content and mechanics.

Sweet! Small cocks are sexy!