by charlieflemming
The admins here need to do better at verifying people's ages, this feels like a high schooler wrote this.
I thought you were a professional from the amount of stories you've written so far. But this was so mediocre and poorly written. Hopefully you'll do better next time to make up for this.
Love it. Not perfectly written, but I always love a threesome action using a mother and daughter.
Written and sounded like a young teen's fantasy. Not much storyline here. Only 3 stars.
why not make it thirteen feet long and the diameter of a grain silo? That would be even hotter, right?
Kindly do yourself (and all of us here) a favour and read "Better Off Together" and "Those Feelgood Hormones" by PanzerFeck.
He was "cumming in gallons"? One of the worst things I ever read you should be ashamed of yourself.
What are you, twelve??? 2 stars (and that's being generous)!
Obviously, you intended a mostly unrealistic, but very hot, short story. I’d say that you surpassed your goals.
5*
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has to be the dumbest shit I ever read, how old are you? 12 yr old? 1 star and that was too much.
i DIDN'T SEE VERY MANY MISSPELLINGS, BUT THE GRAMMER STILL HAS MANY PROBLEMS.
This "cure for depression" cured me of wanting to read any more of your stories.
You seem to either drag a story out or blow thru the premise.
This one you definitely blew thru.
Love your stories though. Just wished you completed more of them
I think people ought not be so critical, this is an unbelievable story but still pretty exciting and no man could remain depressed under these circumstances.Great imagination!