All Comments on 'A Cure For Depression'

by charlieflemming

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 2 years ago

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

Not your best story, sorry to say.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The admins here need to do better at verifying people's ages, this feels like a high schooler wrote this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I thought you were a professional from the amount of stories you've written so far. But this was so mediocre and poorly written. Hopefully you'll do better next time to make up for this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love it. Not perfectly written, but I always love a threesome action using a mother and daughter.

grayge37grayge37over 2 years ago

Written and sounded like a young teen's fantasy. Not much storyline here. Only 3 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

why not make it thirteen feet long and the diameter of a grain silo? That would be even hotter, right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Kindly do yourself (and all of us here) a favour and read "Better Off Together" and "Those Feelgood Hormones" by PanzerFeck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If this shit is depression, then please kill me...

quinton456quinton456over 2 years ago

Horrible in every way. What the hell is wrong with you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

He was "cumming in gallons"? One of the worst things I ever read you should be ashamed of yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

How the hell do you have this many followers with this high school crap?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The fact that this story was made is bringing back my depression.

tomar82403tomar82403over 2 years ago
WTH?!?! Hung like a Moose?!?!?

What are you, twelve??? 2 stars (and that's being generous)!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Obviously, you intended a mostly unrealistic, but very hot, short story. I’d say that you surpassed your goals.

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A little rushed, but still good. 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ru ever gonna continue incestuous medicine????

MAJESTY210MAJESTY210over 2 years ago

A very good short story

sexymeupsexymeupover 2 years ago

has to be the dumbest shit I ever read, how old are you? 12 yr old? 1 star and that was too much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

i DIDN'T SEE VERY MANY MISSPELLINGS, BUT THE GRAMMER STILL HAS MANY PROBLEMS.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This "cure for depression" cured me of wanting to read any more of your stories.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

ZephyrwhirlZephyrwhirlabout 1 year ago

You seem to either drag a story out or blow thru the premise.

This one you definitely blew thru.

Love your stories though. Just wished you completed more of them

rbloch66rbloch6612 months ago

This was quite the mess to read.

mbdiablo62mbdiablo623 months ago

I think people ought not be so critical, this is an unbelievable story but still pretty exciting and no man could remain depressed under these circumstances.Great imagination!

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