All Comments on 'A Cure for the Blues'

Some very sexy elements here but some of it is too fast and you could use some help proofreading. Overall, I liked it. It's a good start. This is a great site to get people to help you edit so take of advantage of it since you obviously have a lot of hot sex and great ideas to share with us.

xoxo,

Di

A lovely story of self discovery .. Ben who may have been Bunny inside for a long time and trying o get out and live her life ..

Wish I could find Bunny

Well Ben didn't "beat around the bush" to becumm Bunny. Luvly start, quick pace, notot too detailed though. Whenever Christine "gets the blues" changing into hur pretty panties and other lingerie 💃👙👭💖 almost always "perks" hur up. Here's to everyone enjoying "Perkyness"...Mmmm. Heading to part 2, Thx for sharing....... xoxoxo