by tobloved
If she has thin calves, she didn't do much track and field...or at least not well. :P
Nicely written, nicely paced - and you've actually spent time building up the characters, which really adds to the impact. As others have written, look forward to Ch.02.
Great story...it would be cool if she got addicted to getting facials! you made me come!
I hope his first release hasn't cured things and that there's time for her to get on top of the problem!
I'm hooked here. So far this has started out to be more than just a cherry busting story. I'm interested to see where you take this next.