by Daddysgirlfl
Very fucking hot! You need a follow-up chapter with Micaela getting pregnant and how everyone in the house deals with it! Five stars and a favorite point!
A great story! I sure hope there will be additional chapters. Maybe a pregnant woman or two?
Incredible story, hit all my favourite fantasies ! Thank you and more please !
My favourite words in this wonderfully depraved, brilliantly written story? "The End...maybe?" Please please, please write chapter 2, Dg. I know you're capable of surpassing yourself and getting me just as nice and wet as chapter 1 did. I'm bound to give this chapter 5 stars.
I am complete agreement with the previous comments. But pregnancies for all three Please next chapter soon
One of the hottest stories I ever read. You could extend it but I don't know how it could be any better.
great story. i wished they talked more about why she left him for someone else and apologised
Please, please, please do a follow-up chapter to this story! There are so many hot story lines you could go down!
I rated this story a 5 (FIVE) for several reasons. Good authorship, good plot, well told, but the five rating was 90% given ("Lisa's body undulated under their hands. Her thighs opened wide when they stroked her wet pussy. I could see the hair glistening. I knew the clit that was hiding in that bush. Lisa had a huge clit. Bigger than any I'd seen,"), BECAUSE POINT BLANK, this was NOT just another shaved pussy story someone wanted to dump on readers. The inclusion of a "GLISTENING HAIR" and a HUGE suck-able clit hiding in that BUSH, was appropriate considering what was going to happen. More pubic hair on females (thick wet bush) and huge clit stories are needed.
Excellent! "A tiny satin triangle covered her blonde bush. Well, not entirely. Curls wrapped around the edge of the red satin." This is not just another a shaved pussy story!
I like stories with real body shapes and pubic hair. Thank you for writing with real types of people.
Nice. Not a fan of the father not being given a chance to consent -- as I'm sure he would when the girls discuss it with him.
I see an opportunity for the girls to have planned it (not the Lisa part) from the beginning.
Larissa is chatting with Micaela in the beauty store (or maybe at Micaela's place?):
"Sometimes my father looks at me with a _hunger_ in his eyes."
"How does that make you feel?"
"It makes me feel desirable. Like I want to be devoured by him."
"Maybe I can help with that. Can you arrange for him to meet me?"
"I think maybe. If I can get him to come to your store. Maybe so he can buy me a birthday present?"
"I think we can make that work."
This is the first story that I read from you, the author. Very nicely written with such a good erotic flavour to it. Not to long and not too short. However, it deserves a follow-up or at least a sequel. For the simple reason we don't want it to end. The reader is left with such a good and warm feeling inside. You have good writing skills. I could only give you 5 stars ... and now, I want to read all your stories. Cheers !
Ummm.. so wtf happened here?
And that's how Larissa found out when she returned from work.
She woke us up when she crawled into bed with us.
"Mmm," I moaned when I felt her soft body.
We leaned over Danny and kissed. He hugged us to each side.
"This is so nice," she said.