All Comments on 'A Damsel in Distress Ch. 03'

by bigcarl796

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papagrizpapagrizalmost 13 years ago
NICE FIRST TRY

Now I am not going to give you a bad time but give you a couple of ideas.

Using your word processor spell check isn't all bad or good. For example

at the end of your story you said you try to "fine" and correct mistakes.

Find was the word you wanted, however, both are actual words and spell check will accept either. I noted a couple more same story. you might want someone else to read over your story and catch those kinds of errors. Enough said keep on writing.

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 12 years ago
I liked your story, looking forward to the next part.

I failed to notice many (if any) words that were spelled wrong. Ditto punctuation. The next chapter should include what happened to the date-rape artist. Thank you, please keep writing.

Jamie1274Jamie1274almost 11 years ago

I like how it was written and look forward to reading more as it progresses further

SequoiaSempervirensSequoiaSempervirensover 7 years ago
I liked it

Nice story. Yes, there were some spelling and punctuation errors. But you did take the trouble to write this story and share it with us. Please keep writing and ignore worthless posts from anonymous commenters.

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