by bigcarl796
Now I am not going to give you a bad time but give you a couple of ideas.
Using your word processor spell check isn't all bad or good. For example
at the end of your story you said you try to "fine" and correct mistakes.
Find was the word you wanted, however, both are actual words and spell check will accept either. I noted a couple more same story. you might want someone else to read over your story and catch those kinds of errors. Enough said keep on writing.
I failed to notice many (if any) words that were spelled wrong. Ditto punctuation. The next chapter should include what happened to the date-rape artist. Thank you, please keep writing.
I like how it was written and look forward to reading more as it progresses further
Nice story. Yes, there were some spelling and punctuation errors. But you did take the trouble to write this story and share it with us. Please keep writing and ignore worthless posts from anonymous commenters.