All Comments on 'A Dance of a Lifetime'

Whenever you see a writer like soul71 post a story, you don’t hesitate to click and read! Would have loved to read that lesbian threesome but the main focus was on Chris and Rhonda and that was well executed! :)

You always deliver the goods, this is another fine story. I enjoyed the slow tease, especially the beach scene. I amazed by the number of stories you have done and I am glad to be able to enjoy your work.

Great story!

You really do deliver the goods on a fun read that sucks you in.

Apparently Baya had Chris's baby,but did Baya swear off fucking Chris after Malika was born or did she change and decide to become bisexual,so Baya,Rhonda,Tonya, & Chris become a loving bisexual,incestual family where Chris became a Father to all 3 Girls babies eventually.

Regardless I love when guys convert full-on Lesbians into happy bisexual girls or women so they get the best of both worlds.I hope they all lived happily ever after.

Such a fun and loving sorry!!!! What a lucky man!!!!

Would've loved to read how the first time with Chris and baya went.

I know there are plenty of stories on Lit but when I read one for a second or third time and it still keeps me interested, then you know it is a great one.

You've done it again! Delightful, loved it. 5/5

I liked this one a whole lot...Cinco Estrellas!

Really good.

Two things:

1) That boy was written as quite dense, OMG. That they were not lovers when they got home from the beach after what Rhonda did and said was hard to believe. If you hit this scenario again, dial the girl's words and actions back a little, or let the guy catch a clue.

2) Chris's getting Baya and his sister Rhonda pregnant deserve to be written for your audience to enjoy, and for the characters to grow. This story deserves a few more pages, or another chapter to deal with that, and how the relationship of the four continues to evolve.

Very close to a perfect incest story.

Thanks for not sidetracking into the lesbian details, not that I have anything against it, but it would have detracted from this story and deserves a separate story of it's own.

WAUW !

Great story apart from a month when nothing happened after he fucked tonya the first time.

You write some really great stories thank you. You really do have a gift for storytelling.

This was a great story. I am not always into the brother/sister incest stories (especially if they are younger). Something about this one grabbed me though. I wasn't expecting to like it as much as I did. I agree with someone else's comment that it might have been nice to hear how Chris and Baya's sexual experience together went, but that's just a small nitpick. The only other thing I have to wonder is how they would be able to afford a bigger place after Rhonda got pregnant and was not able to strip anymore (at least not for about 6 months after she started getting bigger and then after giving birth before being able to lose the extra baby weight). Outside of those things, this was really a good story

10/10!!!!!

ANY story with a F'N Ronnie James Dio reference is AWESOME by default!

A good story that was spoilt by the 2 bitch roommates!! Should have stayed between brother and sister

Excellent story, especially including the roommates! I'd like to score it higher than a 5! I only wish it was longer. Thank you.

Good story but when her whore roommates got involved, it spoilt it!!

Great story loved the ending

The VIP room - Rhonda was a prostitute.

Soul I have read this story so many times (and most of your others too) but this one for me captures the love between Brother and Sister better than any of your others. Somehow despite Rhonda's job she is wholesome and she and Chris deserve to be together. I wouldn't mind an update sometime down the line if you ever feel like doing one. My favourite Brother, Sister couple, I think you got all the characters just right.

Soul 71 you are a master story teller, thank you, thank you for another great story. I really like that in your stories the sister is older than her brother, that is not usually the case in most of the other stories that I have read, going back over 20 years that I have read.

Oh damn!! This is one of the loveliest stories I have ever read on literotica, for that matter that goes for any other sex story site that I have visited. I find that I get so emotionally connected to Soul71's stories I am amazed how enjoyable he is to read. I know that as a society we condemn incest, but when it involves 2 people like Rhonda and Chris, 2 consenting adults, I just think they should be left alone to love each other, grow old together and be happy.

I wish he would revisit the four characters and tell us about their lives and what happened to them, did they stay together raise their kids together, and what did Rhonda and Sonya do after they stopped stripping.

Sharing the brother with her whore friends was bad...

Should have been just the two

It's just about always a pleasure reading your stories. it's pretty easy to get invested in your characters the way you write them. All in all a pretty wholesome story. Good little appetite cleanser to read between some of your longform and serialized stories.

I’m glad her being gay started trusting Chris and started touching his dick and stuff so she can have baby so her and toy a can be happy

That was a great story b

I thought your ending was well and truly rushed. All of a sudden Baya was pregnant and had a baby then the sister was pregnant. There was NO sexual description what so ever of when, where or how Baya got fucked which I thought let this story down especially her being a supposedly hard core dyke…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

All I have to say is all lesbians are nothing