All Comments on 'A Dangerous Bet Ch. 01'

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LustyScribeLustyScribeabout 1 year ago

That was a great story! Hard to believe that's your first story on here. Ixd love to read more from you.

NewmarketNewmarketabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks Lusty Scribe. First one I have ever written anywhere :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is a very hot story, well written. She sounds fun....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I liked it very nice. What if Paul and Luke join together Paul teaches Luke to be Mary's Master and they both control her. And then introduce Mary to the group having her service all of them. Just a thought hope I did not over step. Looking forward to reading more Thank you

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