by Del_Negro
Suspended belief [especially for the locker room scene]
Did not vote because I do not know how to vote 4.5 [subtract .5 for language/spelling/incorrect term use...
Look forward to reading next chapter.
I read both of your stories. You do a great job creating pictures in the minds of the reader. I see these stories have been around for quite a long time. It saddens me that you quit writing.