All Comments on 'A Dark Tale Ch. 04'

This story continues to hold my interest, a lot. I enjoyed the 'fleshing out' of the main characters, helps the reader to read the story in depth, not just superficial characters. This is going to be yet another one of Sylvia G's many chaptered tales. A format she does as well as anyone I've read.

Having read all the chapters so far I hope Sylvia continues her tale. I like how she skips around a bit and I have to put some real thought into trying to keep up! And whoever Andrew is, he certainly knows how to play a creepy villain. I find myself caring about what happens to these people. Well done Miss!