All Comments on 'A Date in Gettysburg'

Looking forward to chapter two

Another good one! Maybe warrants a follow up.

5

Sweet bit of Romance Lite. Actually it feels like a prologue - an introduction of characters with a hint of plot and subplots. Tantalizing. I hope there’s more. Thanks much.

Thanks all for reading and commenting.

A follow up is what I had in mind during the writing. As with all stories - as with the game of chess per my mention of it in the story - there's multiple paths to take, a dizzying array of possible plots and sub-plots that I look forward to working. Which one fits best is the question. Stay tuned.

Enjoyed the story set-up and look forward to more. I used to cruise that stretch of route 30 between Gettysburg and York all the time in search of antiques. Ate at the Dobbin House, too. A 5 for a nice beginning.

Not Trump. Not Biden. No politics.

This story is a good start. Needs a good end. Please write one.

Burninglove

(Some of your other stories are classics. Thanks for those !

Neat startup Chapter. Always interesting to read about a place with which you are familiar. Been to the battlefield several times and Little Roundtop and Devils Den are a couple of my favorites. Neat setting for a first date especially with someone interested in history.

This is my first taste of your writing and very impressed. Well written, smooth flow, realistic meaningful dialogue, well done! Definitely done a bit of writing and it shows.

Looking forward to the next chapter and maybe more after that. Let the story take you where it wants to go and where/when it's time to end.

5 stars for a good start for what could be a wonderful series if you want to pursue.

On to the sequel already published.

Cheers

SAGE

Minor error- I think you meant *Cemetery Ridge*. Pickett’s Charge began on Seminary Ridge and advanced towards a clump of trees near the angle of the Union lines on Cemetery Ridge.

Other than that, nice writing.

The mention of trump didn’t sour only Sarah’s mood. Keep politics out of an otherwise great story.

An anonymous poster said politics can ruin a good story. A character's political beliefs tells something about that character. Writers don't necessarily have a political agenda just because one of their characters expresses his or view political view or who said character voted for. The poster said that because I mentioned that one of the main characters voted for Trump, it ruined the story for him/her.