All Comments on 'A Daughter Fucks Her Mother'

There's a lot good going on with this story, but the use of hyphenated adjectives is so annoying it's unreadable. "Strong-lithe" is not a thing. And this goofy quirk is repeated through the story. Knock that shit off and I think your work will be quite good.

What the hell does he have to do with anything?

This is like my dream scenario, combing incest and a beautiful t-girl. Please write more.

The twisting this story makes it extra hot.

Yes, a wonderful story - so HOT, arousing and has so many possibilities ! Interesting that Taly has such a long, thick cock with heavy balls so loaded and can stay hard after cumming !! Hopefully, the next time, Taly will get behind her Mom and screw her hard and for a long while and give her an even bigger load that this one. Cannot wait to read more about this wonderful encounter. Thanks !!

But what in the hell is that dedication at the end? I'm not sure Trayvon would be into incestous dickgirl erotic fiction. Was that a joke, because I laughed my ass off. It came of of nowhere! But yeah peace to Trayvon!

hottest i have ever read. seriously. what a great concept and job writing.

would love to see more from this especially the mom knocked up maybe have her go after and aunt next or something

I think Trayvon Martin would have been honored to be remembered in a piece on incestual dickgirl fiction. I think his little heart would have thumped in his chest, each beat jetting a little more cardiac blood out onto the grass of his imagination, as he contemplated the raunchy, sweaty action of a hermaphrodite slamming it to her own mother like a rutting badger. Maybe it would have spoken to something in him, like a .44 slug straight to the heart. It's a touching rendition. Just like he would have undergone rendition for assault if that guy hadn't popped a cap in his ass.

a tranny story?

The imagination of the new order of things to do in the world of the forbidden fruit.

I don't understand your choice of dedication, but if you think Trayvon Martin would be honoured by this, then who am I to question...

Is there any chance of uploading 2nd part of this story.

So all that didn't take a minute