All Comments on 'A Dawning'

I actually enjoyed this story quite a bit, which was intriguing, enticing, exciting and definitely hot sexually. Would like to see more Lesbian literature from the Author, such as Dawning Pt. 02 and / or a new story.

Rated 5*-Stars All The Way!!!!!!!

I absolutely loved the story............thank you for the wonderful orgasm.

Story was hot, sexy! The decriptions of actions, reactions and how the characters related to one another produced like a rain forest in my panties. Wow...Dawn takes no prisoners only slut (wanna be's)😂 Enjoyed the story. It would be interesting to see this trio interact in a different setting. Thanks for sharing . Trace

I don't know about the US but in the UK that would be enough to get both doctor and nurse struck off (no matter how discreet, sooner or later someone would shoot her mouth off). A bit clinical in places but a well-written story---I'd like to read more from you.

Outstanding! More more more!

I loved how sensual and erotic it was. I’d love to read more.

Exciting story and very well- written. On the long side however. I think it could have been divided into three chapters. Introduction describing main character and lead up to the appointment Then time at the doctor's doing prep with Dawn. Finally Doctor's arrival and exam

Finally found a doctor I'd go out of network for...

Very sexy.

Reminiscent of but far superior to the lesbian D/s, kitten/cougar pablum that silkstockingslover cranks out like McDonald's chicken nuggets. There’s definitely an audience for this kind of stiff here on Literotica, so you might want to consider a sequel to this well written tale. Five stars.

A super story very well written

Definitely an unusual way to meet your soul mate(s). I'm not going to focus on the ethical land mines in the story because this is obviously erotic fiction. I will instead focus on the smart premise and the erotic revelations as the story unfolded. It went far beyond what I expected, but in a good way. Karen came to the clinic for help with her problem and she definitely got an effective treatment. I don't think this story necessarily needs a sequel but it's worthy of one.

Really well done. Really good balance of sexy and sweet, Dawn's mixture of authority and aftercare at the end is SO good.

Yes, wonderful story, the author must be a woman because I doubt a man could be that descriptive, however this man loved it. So hot - I hope to read more from you so please keep writing. SS

while in the stirrups. Poor exam quality.

No matter how much it runs through the male mind that laying on your back in an examination chair with your legs spread wide and lady bits exposed for all to see is a highly erotic scenario, for this female it never has been sexy and probably never will. In the right circumstances it could be, but when I think about why I am there and the examiner is the wrong sex and appears to be way past the wrong side of sixty, plus there are three or four trainees looking over his shoulder (or is that just me?), then as far as I'm concerned this is not the place where I am going to embarrass myself further by cumming in front of complete strangers.

The story was fine, it worked as a piece of erotic fiction, but in my world no one is going to incidentally examine my orgasm ability, voluntarily or involuntarily, no matter how hot I think she is.

Wow what a story. I have read countless lesbian stories and this is one of the best. A 5 isn't high enough for this story. Thank You

Three-ways have never been my thing but I luvved this insanely sexy story. There were times when the mesmeric interaction between Karen and Dawn (a perfect link with the title) was so exciting that it left me breathless. Raw sex is brilliantly woven into an enthralling story, so a very big thank you.

Great story on an emotional level and very erotic too.

Fabulous, beautifully written, and wickedly erotic. I could feel thr chemistry between them all