All Comments on 'A Day At Home Ch. 01'

Love it!

Too good to waste, great concept

Really well done. Looking forward to more of your stories.

It would of been nice to see another part to this. Something like how the sister ended up having sexual feels for her brother after that and them having sex. But, it was a twist from what's normally posted here

Just wanting to let people know there is another chapter I'll be uploading soon (and I'm working on the 3rd chapter atm).

The second chapter is a bit longer and covers the weeks and months after this event.

You have a cheeky style that reads well, Az. This is a delicious morsel of smut. I'm very much looking forward to the next serving. I bet a few thousand other folks are too. Again, well done. Cheers, PF.

Great story keep going. Add something like it keep coming back and sis and mom come and help out.

Thanks for the great storie.

J

Great concept, great style, but I felt a little let down by the detail and duration of the blowjob. Paragraphs and paragraphs of wanking and then only a few sentences for the blowjob. All that quality buildup deserves a good detailed climax.

Well deserved 5/5, but next time try to end them a bit more satisfyingly.

Although the story line is not new, you have a way of re-inventing in such a fun cute male way that it is still new and refreshing. Well done!

Oh man,I really hope this didn't happen to you.So funny..good story tho. Loved it.