All Comments on 'A Day At Home Ch. 03'

by Azshade

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
Going well

Hope it lasts

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Exceptionial story.

I love reading this story it is the best. I can't wait to read the next chapter & I am hopeful that there is a happy ending with them still together.

AzshadeAzshadealmost 15 years agoAuthor
Author Here

I hope this chapter gives people what they've been holding out for, albeit brief. I am working currently on the next chapter, which I hope to be both erotic and longer (again story-based).

I'm also polishing off the first chapter of another story along similar themes. Expect both some time in the next week or so.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice

This was a good store. Although it was short, it was a nice one that had a nice connection for both

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Don't stop now keep going

Good story line keep it going and make it hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
When are you going to do an addition to your story

Keep going!

jaqvertjaqvertalmost 13 years ago
Realistic first-time sex scene ..

Pretty good.

Elderj1977Elderj1977over 8 years ago
Fucking hysterical........and awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the story so far! I especially like the little quips interspersed throughout, just to give it a bit humour! Keep it up!!

honybipolahonybipolaalmost 7 years ago
love this

nice play with words too...humor in sibling incest plus romance added to your hot story

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