All Comments on 'A Day At The Beach: The...'

Well done, babe. A good plot with a nice twist at the end. Good characters.:D and Good sex. Definately a keeper.

continuation... i cant imagine a more perfect summer. so honored that you wrote about my little beach and me. huge smiles all day.. many ass tingles!

*hugs*

v~

I read Vella's. Thought it was great and you have kept the bar high with this effort.

-Colly

very well done my lovely friend. you have really outdone yourself this time, and I know there is so much more inside just waiting to be revealed. Can't wait for the next one. Maybe one day you and I will meet at the beachhouse and live out our fantasies. LYMI

Really loved the lead up, felt suspended, waiting for what was about to happen. The sex lingered and I LOVED that. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

I love stories that extend the chain of being.

This one is an excellent example of this.

Well done.

Hot Crotch Honey strikes again! Fabulous story love, captured the characters and the sex was sizzling. Two Thumbs up.

Your stories just keep getting better and better! I love this!

So where is this beach?

.......that part about rubbing your ass was VERY sensual. Definitely appealed to an ass man like me.

That's enough to make me want a beach house.

Now.

Great story Honey!! Really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

You are the mistress of the tease! I love your detailed descriptions

You are a wonderful writer; so sensual, so erotic.

I can't wait to read more of your stories