All Comments on 'A Day at the Office'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
warm!!

oh very nice

would have liked more transition from irritable to turned on for the supervisor

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good firststart

Nice job. I am interested to see where you take it. You definitely have talent. Keep it up!!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
GREAT START

Now have the boss do humiliating and embarrasing things to the assistant and her boyfriend. I LOVE this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hot

pleae give us more

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great story

Would have liked to read more, want to know what happens next! Great story

jimnfelixjimnfelixabout 18 years ago
Good Start

More, more, more! However, you need to work on your nouns and pronouns: their misuse made it difficault to keep the excitement up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
a little more because it sucked

I Think You Could Have Done More With This Story And Maybe We Can Become Lovers Im A Girl

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
want more

i love the story and want so much more, the story ended way to soon, please write more

talleywitt0071776talleywitt0071776over 14 years ago
more development

I think the premise was great and would have wanted a lot more to happen between them. you changed point of view midway through, which was a little confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Yumm!

I came while reading this, I am undressed and horny now,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
yay

i came from this story awsome feeling

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
mmmmmmmm so wet

Ohhhhhhhhh wow.this made me cum hard

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
don't stop there, please.

keep it cumming.

Chloe needs to be used.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Office is a Naughty Place

nice story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

No oral?! C'mon!

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