by naughty goddess
oh very nice
would have liked more transition from irritable to turned on for the supervisor
Nice job. I am interested to see where you take it. You definitely have talent. Keep it up!!
harpersmaine@yahoo.com
Now have the boss do humiliating and embarrasing things to the assistant and her boyfriend. I LOVE this one
Would have liked to read more, want to know what happens next! Great story
More, more, more! However, you need to work on your nouns and pronouns: their misuse made it difficault to keep the excitement up.
I Think You Could Have Done More With This Story And Maybe We Can Become Lovers Im A Girl
i love the story and want so much more, the story ended way to soon, please write more
I think the premise was great and would have wanted a lot more to happen between them. you changed point of view midway through, which was a little confusing.