All Comments on 'A Day At The Seaside Ch. 01'

You got me interested and excited waiting for where the story might go from here! (Is it true?)

please write more

I loved the plotline. My favorite fantasy and occasional reality. From a literature point of view, it was well written except for the introduction of all the characters, which was a bit awkward. You might try working them into the story more slowly. Great story. Eager to read the next chapter!