All Comments on 'A Day at Work'

You did it again. This story was a fun read.

The grammar, spelling, and wordsmithing are excellent. All your characters are relatable and the dialog flows very smoothly.

Thank you for sharing.

very nice one!

A little too abrupt at the end. More descriptive actions could have been inserted, and a detail should have been told about Rob’s manhood to complement the features of Sophia. All in all though a nice story to read.

The oblivious guy is lucky that she didn’t give up.