All Comments on 'A Day in the Life'

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johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 2 years ago

A quick and yet surprisingly well rendered family portrait told from the perspective of a clearly multifaceted dynamic woman. Nicely done. Thank you.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 2 years ago

Thanks for your story!

5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Your words just seem like a good way to start the weekend! Thanks, 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

DSolomonDDSolomonDalmost 2 years ago

Good way to start the day.

Any day

Thanks

King_WillieKing_Williealmost 2 years ago

Awesome story, but do you mind running again the numbers on the Carson situation? :)

lover1953lover1953almost 2 years ago

No tension...? No...What if...?

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 2 years ago

And thank you for that! 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Add a picket fence and a dog and you've got the American dream.

Nice change of pace from the Sturm und drang of so many stories.

Thanks for this.

MattblackUKMattblackUKalmost 2 years ago

I liked that. A nice sorbet to end the meal. Kind of thing.

ChopinesqueChopinesquealmost 2 years ago

Five, five five! No other possible rating! Bless your fictitious characters! And the real ones like 'em!

CaptFlintCaptFlintalmost 2 years ago

A lovely dose of life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I listen to my wife talk about her job and it's dramas.

I put meals on the table and so does she.

Well she mostly.

But after 40 yrs a couple with the 40th anniversary coming up.

We celebrate daily being together and enjoy what we have.

So yes it can happen and does.

Cheers

FireFox59FireFox59almost 2 years ago

Nice little short tale of an actual loving wife. I think one thing we tend to forget reading in the LW section is that there are millions of wives and mothers just like this one.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefalmost 2 years ago

What a little gem of a story. Very refreshing and well written. Thanks

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69almost 2 years ago

Love a great life story !!!

lerenardruselerenardrusealmost 2 years ago

That put a smile on face.

jazzharpjazzharpalmost 2 years ago

That's real! Thank you.

GerMagGerMagalmost 2 years ago

Perfect story to reflect how lovely life can be! Exactly how my life was and still is, would'nt want to change a thing.

ibuguseribuguseralmost 2 years ago

I like happy endings.

Regguy69Regguy69almost 2 years ago

Nice glimpse into the workings of a successful marriage. I recall how chaotic things were with young kids, job, household and family responsibilities. While most of it is just a blur, I specifically remember a few of the times we each did that “extra duty” to help out. The love, respect and devotion was always a two way street. Thanks for reminding me, I’m going to go kiss my wife, again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thank you for a lovely story of a wonderful marriage and family life the way it was meant to be. 5/5

ggariousggariousover 1 year ago

Wonderful story of marital love and support. A welcome break from some of the LW stories.

ChopinesqueChopinesqueabout 1 year ago

Warmth. Fidelity. Joy after the worky part. Love it!

DessertmanDessertman12 months ago

A lovely little story of a happy marriage.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good story of how a marriage and life should be. BardnotBard

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

Short and sweet. Many of us probably live lives like that. 4*.

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Good job. Four stars.

JPB NOT BOB

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