All Comments on 'A Day on the Beach'

It's an unusual story, to me, but one that was well written with nicely drawn out characters. Seemed to have the right mix of curious, caution, and suddenly unleashed passion.

I liked that Tilly asked Megs if she could see her again. That was very sweet.

very well done on the build up the this story , it was very realistic and extremely arousing with a great climax (no pun intended ) , hope it continues

Incredibly well done; great pacing and the payoff was definitely worth it!

Wow. Just to go to the beach with thdse types of "friends" is awesome.

What a great story. I so enjoyed, as another reviewer has commented, the build up from curious to rampant sex and then the aftermath, with no predictable, 'and they were all embarrassed and had to change jobs' type ending nor 'and now I'm never going to fuck a man ever again'. It was a lovely, soft ending, with agreement to keep the activity out of the office and Tilly's whispered question. Nicely done.

Loved it!

Great story. Not much plot line, but excellent descriptions of the action. More please.

I loved the innocuous introduction, and the well-crafted development of the narrative.

And then, it’s sexy as hell !

Definitely one to share with my wonderful lover.

Thank you !