A Day on the River

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Marriage to Jacks was everything I hoped it would be, although starting off with a Freshman in college and a high school child was definitely different.

Epilog

We eventually had two children of our own, a boy and a girl. We named them Robert and Martha. If they were half the human beings as their namesakes, they will truly make the world a better place.

After they graduated, Jimmy and Claire married, making Claire both my daughter and sister-in-law. We get a few odd looks when people figure out our family; but it works for us, and in the end, that's all that matters.

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29 Comments
DreadWriter6969DreadWriter69695 months ago

A lovely love story.

Thank you for irrigating my eyes and tear ducts!

NitpicNitpicover 1 year ago
How

How could she ring Robert and Martha at home,when they were at the fireworks display with them.Also convenient they lived long enough to express their wishes,normally folk injured that bad are in a coma.What happened to Jack's and Jimmies relationship with their parents?.Were they invited to the wedding?.

Cracker270Cracker270almost 2 years ago

I wonder if anyone else felt the influence of Randi. Great job. Thank you

freebase2020freebase2020almost 2 years ago

old-man writing. typically terrible from the author, who is a scold like an old woman.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 2 years ago

like that its written from a female perspective. car crash was not necessary and ending way to rushed, silly

NitpicNitpicalmost 3 years ago
What

What about Jack's parents,surely him and Jimmy getting married created some sort of re-union.?

hang1022hang1022almost 3 years ago

Would have been 5 star until you killed off the parents? Loved the rest of the story.

OlgreyfoxOlgreyfoxover 4 years ago
YESSSSS

Thank you so very much for this wonderful romantic love story. I just sat back and thoroughly enjoyed this great read. KUDOS

rodryder44rodryder44almost 5 years ago
Southern Charm

Can't say I've read another story on Literotica written in the first person black voice. With the exception of her views on cops and the 'state', I felt Slate's outlook on life was very white. It was a love story and it was very good. I think the author needed a catalyst to end the story and Rob and Martha's death served that purpose well BTW, this isn't a LW story, it's Romance. I liked all the characters. Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Indeed,...

...that is ALL that matters.

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