All Comments on 'A Day to Remember'

Very nice story

A good story with some real feelings and emotions. Benefits of such relationships can be great. Be patient and in the right circumstance you will achieve your desire.

You gave great detail with the beginning not too ambiguous. A good start with a new author to this site. Will look for another story from you.

RS

This is great I will be looking for more stories from you

You mentioned her friend cassidy I think you should make a story about cassidy and Brittany but anywayz great story very hot! Xoxo

Good first story new writer. One critique though, the word stench is used to describe something that smells unusually bad. I don't think that was your intent to describe brittany's pussy. That's all.

this makes me wish i had a hot sister!

Maybe for your second story (as a follow up story) have them move out and live together, but they eventually become lovers and she gets pregnant from him. That'd be hot!

Short story did they become lover. Did Brandon and Brittany have more sex or was it one time deal. By reading this they should have went to one or the others bedroom and fucked the day away.

I shared a bathroom with my sister, there was a lock on the door into each others room but we never used them, we often showered together and fucked when we had the time.

It doesn't matter how well the guy is doing, women can't resist the urge to issue instructions.