All Comments on 'A Deal with Day Laborers'

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ErilogicaErilogicaalmost 2 years ago

Good story, but it is without real conclusion.

Just can't believe that Trevor didn't ravished her without protection while she was still strapped to the bed, living out deep fantacy. At least some pretext to make him believe that he made the MC pregnant.

Otherwise, how it was the end of their marriage and her comfortable life when he discovered her pregnancy.

Surely, the daughter should have had some of the MC's features.

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