All Comments on 'A Deal's a Deal'

The so call writer of this disgusting story must have been born out of a unself respectful woman that's why he wrote this story.A self respected son would have sent his mother to the hospital after been severely beaten, one for disrespecting him and secondly for cheating his father.

The writer of this story needs one to learn grammar and the use of spell check, and two what kind of son would ever allow such a bet ??? The writer must have obviously not been cared for by his mother, maybe he should allow his best buddy to do this to his mother (if he has one)

Jason should just get a baseball bat and hit Bryce a few times with it to show mother what happens if she act's like a slut.

Great story and brought back good memories. Two of my friends fucked my mom and boasted to the whole school about it; the humiliation and embarrassment was delicious.

Wow that was great! I hope there is a part two.

In the story, Sarah had 2 hair colors (blonde & auburn), grammar needs work, etc,

Good catch! You picked up on the subtext that she dyed her hair but the roots are starting to grow in. It was all intentional. Also, to people who didn’t like this story: I’m sorry I didn’t include a scene where Sarah gets beaten to death. Maybe next time????

Piece of shit story.

I usually like some more back story and a lead into the sex but it worked for me especially the cursing in witch I tag searched.

lame fantasy story

wish it could be me.

This was lame and bull shit all the way

To the writer I don't think anyone would wanna read a story where she gets beaten but we really didn't wanna read a story where she betrays her son and does so openly